Winner
2023 Australian Christian Teen Writer Award
Caleb MacLaren from Victoria won the 2023 Australian Christian Teen Writer Award with his screenplay The Journey.
This is what the judges had to say about The Journey:
In a modern twiston the Noah’s Ark story, this script follows four companions as they navigate an empty world devastatd by an alien attack. The plot is complex, the cahracters compelling and the dialogue natural. Neither preachy nor syrupy, the story is permeated by a subtle redemptive edge and a clear message of hope when all seems lost. When performed, this ambitious and exciting play will be a hit amongst teenagers.
An extract from The Journey
They make eye contact. Again a moment of tension. IONA is scared of this, and remembers something.
IONA
Oh yeah, I saw this, it fell out of your bag. I think it’s yours.
IONA sits up and pulls something out of her pocket: a Lego Superman keyring. It has lost an arm and is a bit roughed up. ARLO notices it, sits up and impulsively snatches it from IONA. This shocks IONA. ARLO feels bad.
ARLO
Sorry, I …
He catches himself. He decides to tell IONA about his past, something that has been hurting him.
ARLO
Continued.
It was my … our … brother’s.
IONA is intrigued. Beat.
ARLO
Continued.
Me and Max were out … when it happened. We came home to the TV still on, our … family, gone. My brother had this in his hand.
ARLO starts tearing up and pauses.
IONA
Somewhat comforting.
What was his name?
ARLO
Isaac. Isaac was his name. He never got to live his life. He could have done so many great things!
IONA gives ARLO a hug to comfort him. IONA’s own confidence surprises her. ARLO is delighted. They pull away from the hug and sit next to each other, both facing the water. ARLO refers to the ‘S’ on the figure’s chest.
ARLO
Continued.
The ‘S’ means hope. I like to remind myself, every time I have those thoughts, every time I doubt who I’m fighting for. To have hope and faith, that this did have a purpose.
ARLO and IONA share a smile.